Out of the Blue, by 
Jan Wong, or what not to say when talking about a Montreal shooting
 
by Beverly Akerman
05.09.2012
If a mechanic replaces your winter tires and scrimps on tightening 
the lug nuts, the consequences — a wheel popping off on the highway — 
can be disastrous. If a doctor leaves a surgical instrument behind, 
misreads a scan, or overlooks the follow-up test result, a patient can 
wind up seriously injured, even dead. So what happens if a career 
journalist confuses correlation and causation on a sensitive file of 
national importance? And what if, to compound the error, her editor 
fails to catch the mistake? And all this takes place during a 
fast-breaking news story?
L’affaire Wong is what happens. 
Out of the Blue is what happens.
I was a fan of Jan Wong’s for much of her career: her writing was 
consistently interesting and often extremely personal, displayed warts 
and all, especially her books about China and her tragic flirtation with
 Maoism. Now there was teenage rebellion carried to the nth degree.
I enjoyed her work during Tiananmen, had a few problems with her 
articles as an undercover domestic worker, munched (often somewhat 
aghast) on the occasional “Lunch With” column, etc.
And then there was the 2006 Dawson College shooting and her infamous 
Globe and Mail article on the subject. For me, that pretty much put the kibosh on Jan Wong’s appeal.
So I was intrigued by the hubbub surrounding her latest offering 
Out 
of the Blue, a book dubbed the first “workplace divorce memoir,” in 
Macleans.
 Triggering a spate of raised-eyebrow headlines, Wong’s publisher 
Doubleday declined the book in the final steps before publication, 
despite the text's having already been vetted by their legal team.
I began following the issue, was approached to write about, and was 
loathe to. Mostly because I didn’t want any of my meagre earnings 
transferred to Jan Wong’s bank account.
My son was at Dawson College on Sept. 13, 2006 — a date that “lives 
in infamy” in my overloaded cranium, I’m afraid — and I’ve written about
 it, too. But my concern was the necessity for more and better gun 
control — Quebec’s infamous mass murderers Lepine, Fabrikant, and Gill 
all managed to purchase their lethal weapons legally, and I continue to 
wonder why our society allows guns to be so easily accessed (the 
shootings at Club Metropolis, during Pauline Marois’ acceptance speech, 
may raise the question anew).
Unlike Jan Wong, I didn’t give a rat’s ass about the “why” of the 
shootings — I remain convinced these men were seriously mentally ill. I 
didn’t care whether Mr. Gill had been refused admission to Dawson (he 
wasn’t) or was a bullied or abused child (who knows)? But nothing 
excuses murder.
To me, all murder is hate crime. Unlike Wong, it never occurred to me
 to ascribe the tragic actions of these men to “racism,” Quebec’s 
supposed antagonism toward “les autres.” But curiosity finally got the 
better of me, and I compromised by buying the Kindle version of Wong’s 
book, about half the price of the paperback.
Several aspects must be considered in evaluating 
Out of the Blue, the one-and-only (or is that the first?) self-published book to be 
featured on CBC radio’s Sunday Edition.
There’s the W5 of Wong’s personal narrative: what happened to her, 
how she felt about it, what she did about it, etc. Which, as might be 
expected of a best-selling career journalist, is eminently readable and 
engaging.
And then there’s the objective part: how did L’affaire Wong — the 
Dawson article and the blowback from it — happen? Where does the 
responsibility lie? And finally, what to think of the way 
The Globe and 
Mail treated what happened next?
I call the first of these considerations “herstory” versus “the 
truth”– an over-simplification, perhaps, but rebuttals are welcome.
Out of the Blue’s premise is that the people of Quebec, and 
the Canadian political class, exhibited a major over reaction to Wong’s 
original article — the paper received a slew of angry letters, Wong 
received mailed excrement and death threats; her publisher informed her 
she had damaged the paper’s “brand”; Prime Minister Harper and Premier 
Charest sent letters to the paper admonishing her, and the House of 
Commons passed a motion demanding she apologize to the people of Quebec.
 All this from several paragraphs of “analysis” inferring three Quebec 
mass murders were a logical outcome of the province’s disdain of those 
who are not 
pure laine.
In the book, and in the clips and interviews where she discusses it, 
Wong treats the uproar to her article as though it was provoked by an 
innocuous single sentence in some 3,000 words. But she actually spent 
over 400 words on this “analysis.” Her point was clearly that Quebec’s 
emphasis on ethnic/racial purity is profoundly alienating and forms part
 of the explanation for Kimveer Gill’s — and Marc Lepine’s, and Valery 
Fabrikant’s — murderous rampages.
But those 400 words were not “analysis”: they were preposterous. Is 
there a single journalist in Canada prepared to stand up on her hind 
legs and ascribe, in public, Luka Magnotta’s (alleged) crimes to the 
ethnic exclusivist nature of Quebec society? No. And that’s not simply 
because Magnotta hadn’t lived in Quebec for very long. It’s because the 
supposition is, for want of a better word (and with apologies to loons),
 loony.
Let’s apply Wong-style reasoning to the Robert Picton case in BC. Is 
there a newspaper that would publish an article suggesting this savage 
killer’s actions were linked to, say, British Columbia’s having accepted
 too many Asian immigrants (after all, immigration from Asia increased, 
and then Picton killed many women, so…)? I don’t think so. And not just 
because it would be politically incorrect to do so.
It’s because B following A doesn’t mean A caused B. Or “Post hoc ergo propter hoc,” as I learned from 
The West Wing.
She describes how her brainwave arose:
On the car radio, a talk-show host was saying that all three of 
Canada’s campus shootings had occurred in Montreal. That’s right, I 
thought with surprise, but why?… ‘A lot of people are saying: why does 
this always happen in Quebec?’ Jay [Bryan, of The Montreal Gazette] 
said. ‘Three doesn’t mean anything. But three out of three in Quebec 
means something.’…Like epidemiologists who look for patterns in the 
outbreak and spread of diseases, reporters also seek meaning in 
chaos—except we must do so on deadline. Three out of three was 
statistically meaningless, but not in a business where we grasp for any 
pattern. For journalists, three is a magic number: it’s a trend.
Here is how that trend was described in her 2006 article, “Get under the desk”:
What many outsiders don’t realize is how alienating the decades-long
 linguistic struggle has been in the once-cosmopolitan city. It hasn’t 
just taken a toll on long-time anglophones, it’s affected immigrants, 
too. 
To be sure, the shootings in all three cases were carried out by 
mentally disturbed individuals. But what is also true is that in all 
three cases, the perpetrator was not pure laine, the argot for a “pure” 
francophone. Elsewhere, to talk of racial “purity” is repugnant. Not in 
Quebec.
Okay, so in 2006, according to Jan Wong, Montreal is no longer 
cosmopolitan, Quebec is racist, and Wong has no real understanding of 
mental illness. Wong committed a cardinal sin of journalism: in the 
absence of any tangible evidence, she confused correlation and 
causation. Her article was marred by a breakdown in the professional 
integrity journalists must be governed by.
There is trash journalism — of Geraldo or Fox News ilk — and there’s 
serious journalism. Unfortunately — for us and for them — on that day in
 September 2006, “under deadline” and in the thrall of a civic tragedy 
cum sensational news story, Jan Wong and Edward Greenspon briefly seemed
 unable to tell the difference. That neither of them works at 
The Globe 
and Mail any longer may not be a coincidence.

By the end of 
Out of the Blue, Jan Wong still can’t accept 
she was the author of her own misfortune. Instead, she writes, “like a 
plot device in an Ian McEwan novel, one random occurrence had set off an
 inexorable chain of events and everything changed.”
But the event wasn’t random. In my opinion, it was generated by Jan Wong’s poor judgement. And her editor’s.
But enough about L’affaire Wong. What about the rest of the book? Does Wong dish that “dish best served cold”?
Does she ever.
Wong commands our sympathy by launching her tale with a poignant 
scene: the author cowering in her car outside her home, convinced that a
 pickup truck parked nearby shelters a homicidal maniac–a Quebecer bent 
on revenge for her Dawson article. This is a delusion, of course. But as
 a literary device, it works.
Wong uses unnamed co-workers — and a dead woman — to establish that 
The Globe and Mail’s was a toxic work environment. The late Val Ross, 
Wong’s friend and colleague, along with two other women co-workers, “had
 been sick from work-related stress. Val told me she had been taking 
antidepressants for years…‘It’s the only way I can stand working here.’”
(Of course, the fact that a significant proportion of women in middle age are on antidepressants should also perhaps be noted.)
Wong’s descent into depression is recounted in excruciating detail. 
And, despite her explanation of a journalist’s near-compulsive 
note-taking, her behaviour demonstrates a degree of functioning still 
hard to reconcile in one supposedly so overwhelmed with depression she 
could no longer work.
Viewed from Wong’s point of view, the devastation that follows her 
2006 article is understandable — extreme and total. But viewed from 
The 
Globe and Mail’s perspective: Wong maintained she was unable to work for
 them, could not write for them, for years. On the other hand, she could
 manage, contemporaneously, to polish off a 90,000 word manuscript while
 on a couple of months of unpaid leave. And mount a successful tour in 
support of the finished book.
Who can blame 
The Globe for being a little tetchy about that, or 
about the notion that her doctor-prescribed peregrinations to Europe and
 China — what she calls “the geographic cure” —  are a reasonable 
treatment for depression? Of course, she might say, “But look, I got 
better using the geographic cure.” In which case, one might reply, “Post
 hoc ergo propter hoc.”
Finally, 
Out of the Blue is, I am sorry to have to say, 
poorly-researched. For example, this early clunker that I noticed 
immediately, about that fateful day back at Dawson College:
Kimveer Gill had shot twenty people. It could have been much 
worse, but two rookie police officers arrived by chance on a 
drug-related tip three minutes after he began shooting. Veteran cops 
might have waited for backup. The rookies drew their guns and rushed 
into the cafeteria. Gill stopped shooting.
Wrong: charging in to confront a shooter had become standard 
operating procedure for police by 2006, as a cursory Internet search 
immediately reveals (I also remember reading about it back then). The 
method had been developed following the Ecole Polytechnique shootings: 
the then-established police practice–establishing a perimeter and 
waiting for SWAT backup — was one of the reasons the Polytechnique toll 
was so tragically high — 14 women murdered, 14 others injured.
In fact, Montreal police said the Dawson College incident was the 
city’s first true test of its revamped emergency response plan.
Deputy police chief Jean-Guy Gagnon, the senior officer in charge 
last Sept. 13 when Kimveer Gill killed one person and injured 20 others,
 says…”We can see a big evolution from the Polytechnique event to the 
Dawson event, the first responder applied exactly to our training 
program,” Gagnon said…Since the rampage at the Ecole polytechnique in 
1989, police officers were trained to identify the suspect or source of 
danger and isolate it. For 18 harrowing minutes, five Montreal police 
officers kept a trenchcoat-clad Gill pinned in a corner, allowing Dawson
 students to escape unscathed. This is the reason we only have one death
 on that day,” Gagnon said. (Canadian Press article from Sept. 12, 2007 “Montreal cops learning from Dawson and two other school shootings.”)
A front page article in Kitchener/Cambridge/Waterloo’s The Record 
published the same day as Wong’s original piece, “Local police were 
doing simulation of rampage,” carries similar information.
Then there is her unquestioning reliance on the report by Montreal 
psychiatric researchers about the psychological impact of the event on 
the school’s survivors, which she mentions in part to underline how she 
isn’t the only person to have been traumatized by the Dawson shootings: 
“The study found they suffered psychological damage at a rate two to 
three times higher than that of the general population, and that the 
trauma increased with proximity to the shooting.”
Logical, perhaps. But 
unscientific in the extreme.
What neither Wong nor Dr. Warren Steiner, head of the McGill 
University Health Centre’s psychiatric department and point man for the 
study in the English press, come clean on is that the study analysed the
 responses of 949 volunteer respondents; I know they were volunteers 
because my son was approached to participate and refused.
Dawson College has some 7500 day students, another 2500 evening 
students, and many hundreds of teachers and support staff. There were, 
literally, thousands of students and staff present at the CEGEP on the 
day of the Kimveer Gill shootings. Is it likely that the 949 people 
studied represent a random selection of those exposed to the violent 
events? Isn’t it reasonable to assume these self-selected respondents 
are, in fact, probably much more likely than the average person present 
to have been traumatized by the violence? Who knows how many of these 
949 people were on the psychologically less copacetic end of the 
spectrum even before the rampage of Sept. 13, 2006?
The bottom line on 
Out of the Blue: Wong’s book-long 
skewering
 The Globe and Mail for firing her reminds me of the standard 
definition of chutzpah: a young man who murders both his parents 
throwing himself on the mercy of the court because he’s an orphan.
Nothing justifies ethnic slurs, hate mail, or death threats, but 
L’affaire Wong was the result of decisions made by Jan Wong and her 
editor. Her remarks, which she neither takes back nor seems to regret, 
revealed an appalling ignorance of and lack of respect for Quebec 
society. Not to mention the sort of pseudo-intellectualizing that would 
have been shot down in a CEGEP term paper.
Probably Wong’s editor Edward Greenspon should have borne the brunt 
of Quebecers’ ire. Her writing crossed the line, and a tight deadline 
doesn’t excuse a seasoned journalist’s provincial character 
assassination. It was her editor’s job, though, to rein her in, to 
correct her lapses. And his failure was epic.
That said, who could then deny that 
The Globe and Mail had a duty to 
support Wong for an illness contracted during her employment with them, a
 result of said employment? No one. Which is, perhaps, why the paper 
eventually settled with her. And yet it’s hard to blame 
The Globe’s 
insurer, Manulife Financial, for having a hard time accepting that she 
was ill, and that “the geographic cure” — world travel — is a bona fide 
medical treatment for depression.
Wong now spends part of her time in Fredericton, teaching journalism 
at St. Thomas University. She also writes for the Halifax 
Chronicle 
Herald. A few years back, 
that paper
 laid off a quarter of its newsroom staff. In 2011, many of its 
freelancers quit after they refused to sign a new, mandatory, all-rights
 grabbing contract.
Beverly Akerman is a Montreal writer; her story collection, The 
Meaning of Children, winner of the David Adams Richards Prize, was 
recently published as an e-book.
This article originally published on The Rover